This summer I've got two things I've been dreading happening. 1. I have to go to the boys and girls club and have to look at his horrible face but maybe since i'm older he'll leave me the heck alone but I very strongly dout it. 2.I have to get more shot(ugh).

I liked your story, but, you spelled doubt wrong. You spelled it dout. Kadie

i loved it it was quite interesting

I like you story, but who os "he" and what does "shot" mean. It looks like you threw this story together.

I don't really like your story because it does not give the readers enough info, for instsnce who in the world is "HE"